tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4835332210478230757.post225516555808790329..comments2009-12-05T07:36:42.857-08:00Comments on Living now: Revised pragraphTahmidul Anikhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12879444440448481120noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4835332210478230757.post-26426452559369552052009-10-28T10:33:14.127-07:002009-10-28T10:33:14.127-07:00Good revisions to more fully support your claim. K...Good revisions to more fully support your claim. Keep working on: <br /><br />- give the author of your text as well as title. <br /><br />- show source for refernece to James Hill: where does this come from?<br /><br />- look at language clarity, grammar, and word form.<br /><br />- be sure you tie your paragraph back to your overall thesis.Prof. T.https://www.blogger.com/profile/00284898866409356025noreply@blogger.com