Thursday, December 3, 2009

Tahmidul's Thesis paragraph

The United States is a nation that influences the rest of the world in many ways. They are a powerful nation that has control of other nations. And they also have a history of invading countries for the wrong reasons and simply because they want to. An example of this is the war and invasion of Iraq. They invaded Iraq on the fact that they had weapons of mass destruction and that they posed a threat to the U.S. Which wasn't true.America is a self interested country and they do what needs to be done for the benefit of the country as they use imperial power to succeed.


  1. Good start. Think about the attention-getting paragraph that will come before this one to capture our attention.

  2. Nicely said! It takes alot for any country to stay on top including maybe some fowl play. I think its better to live in a #1 country than a #-non country o_O